Hey, folks!
On Monday, Oct. 8, myself and Geoff Butterfield of the George Lucas Educational Foundation's Edutpoia site will be doing a tech talk at Google campus in Mountainview. 1/2 hour of this will be me yammering on and on about Drupal and how awesome it is, the other 1/2 will be Geoff demoing the Edutopia site and how it uses elements like CCK, Views, etc.
I've been doing some back-and-forth with people in #drupal about this, but it occurs to me that this might be a good thing to coordinate at this level too. You can see the presentation in its half-finished state at http://docs.google.com/TeamPresent?fs=true&docid=dd5v64f3_68f7tqhp&pli=1. Please comment on stuff like:
- Is the content appropriate to a developer audience?
- Are there other things missing?
- Things that should be taken out?
- Ideas for spiffying it up?
- Do you have content you can give me on stats and other things like that?
Note that you can safely ignore weird font sizes and stuff; this looks fine on-screen it just gets messed up when the presentation is posted.
Thanks in advance for any feedback! Since I'll be there as an "ambassador" for the Drupal community, I'd really like to go a good job with this. :)

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Overall the presentation looks like a good direction, particularly the beginning to early-middle. Without knowing more about the audience and the specific reason most of them will be there (e.g., in what role/manner are they planning to be involving themselves with Drupal? Would they be developers, users, or project leaders that hand out duties to someone else?) my comments are: