Drupalcamp Atlanta announcement on front page...

Before a story can be promoted to the front page of g.d.o., it needs to be combed for accuracy, overdose-of-verbiage, and anything which just doesn't read well. Try going over the story once more and see if you can clean it up a little to make in A) shorter if possible, B) more impactful, C) more factual and detail-rich.

Oh, and also, if you could please remove the underlines on those two phrases? I went to click on them and neither one of them took me anywhere. :)

Thanks in advance, and remember that this is not a criticism of the current post, this is an attempt to make the homepage as amazing as we can make it. Cheers!
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Senpai